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He is now studying the 8th grade with excellent performance at XX high school. One of his future plans is to study at the US. So he studies hard on English, meanwhile he has supports from all family members. He really likes the school after reading your introduction. We sat in for the SLEP exam in Shanghai this March, and he scored 54. Detail is attached. We would very much like him to atttend the 9th grade in Fall this year in the US.

As my brothers and relatives live in California, we want to find him a school dormitory there. The expenses of your school is too expensive for a family like us to afford. Thus I would like to ask if there is any kind of scholarship or subsidy we can apply for international students? And what is the limit?

Look forward to receiving you reply at your earliest convenience.

Thanks and regards,

He is a grade eight student who studies at ** middle school. His dream is to attend the senior high school in America. In order to achieve that, he work hard to learn English, and our whole family give him full support. He likes your school very much after reading the introduction of your school. We had attended the SLEP Test in Shanghai in March this year, his score is 54. The details of score enclosed in the attached sheet. We want to let him to go to America in the next fall to attend grade nine.
We like to find him a boarding school because my brother's family live in California. But the cost of your school is rather high, I am afraid family like ours could not wholly receive. So we'd like to quaere whether international student could apply subsidy or scholarship? And what's the limit of the application?
Looking forward to hearing from you! Thank you very much!

He is an outstanding grade 8 student at XX secondary school at present.Our family supports his ideal to pursue his high school study in the Unitd States. He has good preparation
in his English ability. After reading the brochure of your school, he decides his choice. His mark is 54 in the slep examination in Shanghai this March( please refer to
the attached detail). We wish him to attend grade 9 in the States for the semester in next fall.

My brother's family is in California so that I would like to look for a boarding school there. However,the fee of your school is rather expensive for our family to substain; I
would like your advice if there is some sort of subsistence or scholarship for foreign student? How is the quota if there is any?

Thank you very much for your early reply.

谢谢各位达人!

he's not studying at XX middle school, an 8th grade student who have good grades. He have a goal to go to highschool in America, and so he worked hard at english to achieve this goal. our whole family is very supportive of this decition of his. He saw the intro of your school and is very appealed. During march this year we took the SLEP test in shanghai, his got 54 points. please see the other page for addition information. we want him to go to america during fall for 9th grade.
because my brother's family is living in Canada, so we want to find a boarding school there for him. because that your school's charge is very expensive, family like ours couldn't afford it, I would like to ask if there's any scholarships for exchange students like ours. and how much money do you have to pay for that?
please reply soon, thank you

He is currently attending secondary schools XX, 8-grade students. Outstanding. He thought the United States is an ideal high school, for which he is also working to learn English We also support his family. He read your school, is also very like Your school. Shanghai in March this year, we participated in the SLEP examinations, the results of his 54 points, concrete achievements to Annex. We wanted him to the United States next fall to read the ninth grade.
My brother because they live in a California, so we want to California to help him find a boarding school. But your school fees is high, such a family, as we all probably difficult to bear, would like to ask for international health It can apply for grants or scholarships »limit the number of applications»
You want to reply as soon as possible. Thank you.